a Mage reborn book 2 Wip rewrite

[srtalobo]

Please!!

 

[justaguyguy]

Cant wait!!!!

 

[justaguyguy]

Oh is the rewrite is already done?

Yep

 

[srtalobo]

I read that too, and to be honest, I still prefer the first demo. I think that lost the essence...
Really sad, bc I love how it was.

 

[Parallax]

I read that too, and to be honest, I still prefer the first demo. I think that lost the essence...
Really sad, bc I love how it was.

What do you mean 'lost the essence'? The pace is slower now but I think that's good - MC isn't immediately bombarded with all the nonsense Tahlia the tyrant has to say, and sent to prepare for the mission.

 

[srtalobo]

Ei, quanto tempo dura esta demonstração reescrita? Termina depois que você conhece Y e F?

You meet Y, do a "mission" with them. I think it's still too short. But after the att it becomes more pleasant